(Ali Cavanaugh: The Entrance)
आकाश ठुलो कि एक मुठी सास ?
भकारी ठुलो कि भोकको एक गाँस ?
घैँटो ठुलो कि एक घुट्को पानी ?
सोचेर एक फेरा भनिदेऊ न ज्ञानी ।
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घाम ठुलो कि रुखको छाँया ?
रवाफ ठुलो कि मुटुको माया ?
सागर ठुलो कि तिर्तिरे धारो ?
छुट्ट्याउन मलाई पर्यो नि गाह्रो।
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कोसी ठुलो कि आँखाको पानी ?
ज्ञानी ठुलो कि अबोध नानी ?
हुरी ठुलो कि थकाइ सुस्केरा ?
गमेर कस्ले भन्देला एकफेरा ?
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यश ठुलो कि याचकको झोली ?
भुल ठुलो कि क्षमाको बोली ?
प्रश्न ठुलो कि निःशब्द उत्तर ?
सोच नियाल तिमी निरन्तर ।
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औँसीको रात कि जुनकिरी उडान ?
ब्रह्माण्ड ठुलो कि एक झिल्को ज्ञान ?
विशाल वन कि कि न्याउलीको बोली ?
भनिदेला कस्ले मन-आत्मा खोली ?
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इन्द्रेणी रङ् कि शिल्पीको भाव ?
उर्लेको नदी कि काठको नाव ?
रगतको खोला कि मसीको थोपा ?
मृत्यु ठुलो कि यो जिजीविषा ?
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बगैँचा ठुलो कि पुतली प्वाँख ?
चिताको मुस्लो कि अस्तुको राख ?
संसार ठुलो कि कविको मन ?
कोही त मलाई सोचेर भन ।
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So lovely !
Really poetic !
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Bhanuvakta ko Prasnottar jastai lagyo…..uttar arko poem ma ho sir?
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Nice one Sir. Tara ali ekohoro answer bhayera pani prasna wachak matra bhaye jasto lagyo. Not expertise in poetry field sending comments from a reader point of view. But still touching
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Thank you Saras. Maybe, you are right….it probably gets a bit monotonous because of its repetitive structure at some point, I am afraid. 🙂
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It’s really very wonderful! My students are going to love it.
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fine composition and fine quest however answer shall naturally vary n that’s the truth
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Thank you, sir. 🙂
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Excellent, Prakash. This is a good attempt. Except for the repetition of the same sentence pattern, the rest is good. It takes some time to master the metrics (which I have not been able to do yet), but you have poetry in you.
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Thank you so much sir. It means a lot to me. I will try to write more.
🙂
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